Probability

 

narritive writing

This term we have been doing narrative writing I have learned show not tell

the end of the world

Once upon a time, there was a man named Bob. He was all alone in a broken city. The city was boiling and there were millions of roots covering the building. The highway was broken and cracked and the buildings that were once lived in were broken while nature had slowly taken over. With animals rummaging the buildings like a swarm of bees. Bob is sixty-five years old. 

Problem

35 years ago everybody suddenly disappeared. Bob wondered, are they all dead? He had to live by himself. The city that took decades to build got thrashed by animals. 30 years later the city was broken like it was built in the one thousand. One day Bob took a walk down the old ancient valley way that led to his old house he opened the old squeaky door he walked in. And to his right there was an old piece of paper that looked like there were coffee spelled on it bob walked over he opened it and it said dear bob these old people are about to take us to this old town called spring lakes for slavery ???

complication  

One day later after reading the letter he went on an adventure to spring lakes he walked out of the city to go to the holding facility. As he walked out the range monkeys were looking at him from everywhere he made a run they chased him into the jungle he hideaway. They could not find him the next day he set of again 2 hours later he found it. !!!

Solution

Finally, I found it, Bob thought. Glancing down the hill  Spring Lakes was in view. he went in while he was strolling around this cowboys guard came out and he asked the cowboys where is my mom they said she did slavery. He asked can I see her so he went in and there she was after 35 years he finely sores her she turned around they ran to each other. One hour later they walked away to their own town mom said home sweet home it looks so different the mom said.

                               The end

By che thank you

Narrative writing goals

 My Writing Goals 

Not yet	Developing	Got it!
	c

My story and sentences make sense
I have a hook
I have characters and setting, problem and solution
I have some direct speech
I have used “ “ ! ? , . correctly
I have used wow words (verbs, adjectives, nouns)
I have some figurative language ( simile, personification)
I have used show not tell (inference)
Different kinds of sentence types and lengths 2A, BOYS sentence,-ed sentence   3 bad -
My writing goals are...
Don't rush my work