lost in the dense, canadean bush!!!!....

in-class I read  hatchet I have been thinking  about the author's message we had to write a reading response to the book in testing conditions here are my thoughts about the book
                                          

 In class we have been reading a book named Hatchet it was a nice story that shows us how to survive and the things that happen        

 t in the wilderness and the dangers it was made by Gary Paulsen the author and shows us about the things that go on in the wilderness

                                              Authors message

I think the author's message was if anything goes wrong never give up and lose hope and to keep going no matter what happens and i think he showed us what can go wrong in the wilderness and the dangers and what to do in those situations and the things that could happen to you and what to do in those moments.

                                               Summary

I personally like this story because it shows us what to do in those situations and the main events like the moose attack and the tornado and the others and it shows us what to do

and how to survive 

crash

 

courage writing snapshot

in-class I have been reading about the life of Jesus Christ. I have been looking for examples of when Jesus was courageous. This is a writing snapshot of me writing about what I learned. I had thirty minutes to do this. 

Jesus Is Courageous

Without fear, there can not be courage this is a famous quote. Jesus is the son of God. He is the one who got sacrificed on the cross for our sins and so there can be peace in the world and we can go to heaven. how is courage seen in the life of the lord? Jesus showed courage by praying to god in the garden of Gethsemani and was crying blood and sweat because he didn't want to get sacrificed on the cross. Then an angel came and strengthen him.

I can learn from this by when you are scared you can pray and an angel will come and strengthen.

courage in the storm 

One day Jesus and his disciples went on a boat and Jesus fell asleep a huge storm came and started filling the boat the disciples woke Jesus up while panicking they said Jesus wake up the boat going to sink Jesus woke up and said be calm the storm stopped they  were relieved

In conclusion i can learn from this because I know that you have Jesus in your life you can do anything

Probability

 

narritive writing

This term we have been doing narrative writing I have learned show not tell

the end of the world

Once upon a time, there was a man named Bob. He was all alone in a broken city. The city was boiling and there were millions of roots covering the building. The highway was broken and cracked and the buildings that were once lived in were broken while nature had slowly taken over. With animals rummaging the buildings like a swarm of bees. Bob is sixty-five years old. 

Problem

35 years ago everybody suddenly disappeared. Bob wondered, are they all dead? He had to live by himself. The city that took decades to build got thrashed by animals. 30 years later the city was broken like it was built in the one thousand. One day Bob took a walk down the old ancient valley way that led to his old house he opened the old squeaky door he walked in. And to his right there was an old piece of paper that looked like there were coffee spelled on it bob walked over he opened it and it said dear bob these old people are about to take us to this old town called spring lakes for slavery ???

complication  

One day later after reading the letter he went on an adventure to spring lakes he walked out of the city to go to the holding facility. As he walked out the range monkeys were looking at him from everywhere he made a run they chased him into the jungle he hideaway. They could not find him the next day he set of again 2 hours later he found it. !!!

Solution

Finally, I found it, Bob thought. Glancing down the hill  Spring Lakes was in view. he went in while he was strolling around this cowboys guard came out and he asked the cowboys where is my mom they said she did slavery. He asked can I see her so he went in and there she was after 35 years he finely sores her she turned around they ran to each other. One hour later they walked away to their own town mom said home sweet home it looks so different the mom said.

                               The end

By che thank you

Narrative writing goals

 My Writing Goals 

Not yet	Developing	Got it!
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My story and sentences make sense
I have a hook
I have characters and setting, problem and solution
I have some direct speech
I have used “ “ ! ? , . correctly
I have used wow words (verbs, adjectives, nouns)
I have some figurative language ( simile, personification)
I have used show not tell (inference)
Different kinds of sentence types and lengths 2A, BOYS sentence,-ed sentence   3 bad -
My writing goals are...
Don't rush my work