HOT TASK

 in-class we have been learning how to do show not tell and figurative language why read my story and see what we have been learning

“Ryder you mugger!” Dad shouted. Shivers ran down Ryder’s spine. Not knowing what to do, he ran for his life and hid behind the water tank. Dad stormed across the burnt, yellow, grass. Ryder bit his nails and fidgeted checking around to see if the coast was clear. suddenly his dad popped out from the other side of the tank like a bear ready to pounce at its prey. Ryder bitting h scared of what his punishment will be. mom inside disgusted at what her kids had thought my kid are theifs thoughts rushing throw her mind like a stamped of bulls

Solution

DAD said to Ryder “I know you were trying to help us but we can't afford water that's why they never come to our house” Ryder said I know that's why I was taking the water” dad said this is not alright Ryder your punishment will be working for aqua plex for a year“Noooooo,” Ryder said he went inside regretting what he had done. thinking about his mom sad at what he had done he went upstairs his mom stared at him Ryder felt ashamed.

 Ending

6 months later Ryder 6 months to go before Ryder doesn't have to work for aqua plex mom and dad are not angry at Ryder anymore Brooke is at school sweating her uniform drenched in 10 months of sweat and about to go home and wash her clothes