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 COLD TASK TERM 2 2022 NARRATIVE 

Write a narrative, this could be a story you makeup or a whanau story you retell. 

in-class we have been trying to achieve our goals in our writing i wanted to get better a punctuation

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One day there was my uncle named John. We were on our way to Auckland when we got down there we stayed with my uncle dino the next morning we went for a walk around town and a walk under the harbor bridge.

When we were under the bridge John made a striped idea to climb the fence to walk along the harbor bridge then my uncle's mate Wally was stupid enough and thought that the big concrete thing holding up the bridge was a big concrete slab but actually it was hollow then he fell down and he survived.

Only having three broken ribs broken leg and arm and internal bleeding he was okay he stayed in the hospital for six months then he went home and learned never to do that again and he is still alive today

in-class we have been trying to achieve our goals in our writing i wanted to get better a punctuation