HOT TASK

 in-class we have been learning how to do show not tell and figurative language why read my story and see what we have been learning

“Ryder you mugger!” Dad shouted. Shivers ran down Ryder’s spine. Not knowing what to do, he ran for his life and hid behind the water tank. Dad stormed across the burnt, yellow, grass. Ryder bit his nails and fidgeted checking around to see if the coast was clear. suddenly his dad popped out from the other side of the tank like a bear ready to pounce at its prey. Ryder bitting h scared of what his punishment will be. mom inside disgusted at what her kids had thought my kid are theifs thoughts rushing throw her mind like a stamped of bulls

Solution

DAD said to Ryder “I know you were trying to help us but we can't afford water that's why they never come to our house” Ryder said I know that's why I was taking the water” dad said this is not alright Ryder your punishment will be working for aqua plex for a year“Noooooo,” Ryder said he went inside regretting what he had done. thinking about his mom sad at what he had done he went upstairs his mom stared at him Ryder felt ashamed.

 Ending

6 months later Ryder 6 months to go before Ryder doesn't have to work for aqua plex mom and dad are not angry at Ryder anymore Brooke is at school sweating her uniform drenched in 10 months of sweat and about to go home and wash her clothes

NOW YOU SEE IT

THE BIG RUGBY GAME

Orientation sports field and characters Two brothers) Problem do not get along - ones adventurous -  they act like good brothers

1. There were once two brothers who were not at all alike. One was addicted to video games and a total game freak; the other was an in-it-to-win-it person and a really sporty guy. Tom was big, fit, fast, and brave. He was the team captain. Jerry was tiny, fat, weak, and scared but he was the smartest in his school. But the other brother was fit and healthy but the dumbest in his school.

2. One afternoon their Mother drops them off at the under 13s rugby games. The team was all there getting ready to play against the Sharks from opo but Jerry was scared of them because the last time he went to opo they gave him a beating then Tom had to come and save him. Tom told Jerry to up get you fat lazy boy and get ready to play Jerry did not want to get up he was too tired/lazy two minutes later he got up and walked down the stairs and they left Jerry was very scared to play Tom was calling him a baby and a chicken Jerry did not like that they got there Jerry had shivers running up his spin and Tom was jumping around an hour later they jumped on the field after subbing all he could heir was Tom voice in his ear chicken/chicken than on the corner of his eye he saw Tom going fling in the air Tom got up scared and didn't want to rerun the ball they passed the ball to Jerry he didn't know what to do so he ran it straight and bumped all the kids of Tom were surprised and Jerry got the try and 20 minutes later they were in the car tom was sore and jerry was laughing

3. Love and forgiveness  

The next day tom and jerry came down for breakfast and tom  told jerry that he was sorry and that he will not say his a chicken they went upstairs and started playing the game and that's the end and after that they lived a happy life

Testing the water in the York stream

 

mental health wellbeing

 in-class we have been learning what it means to be healthy. I learned that do not to eat junk food all the time and don't be lazy and to exercise. your mind is important as well

cold task

 COLD TASK TERM 2 2022 NARRATIVE 

Write a narrative, this could be a story you makeup or a whanau story you retell. 

in-class we have been trying to achieve our goals in our writing i wanted to get better a punctuation

Name che

One day there was my uncle named John. We were on our way to Auckland when we got down there we stayed with my uncle dino the next morning we went for a walk around town and a walk under the harbor bridge.

When we were under the bridge John made a striped idea to climb the fence to walk along the harbor bridge then my uncle's mate Wally was stupid enough and thought that the big concrete thing holding up the bridge was a big concrete slab but actually it was hollow then he fell down and he survived.

Only having three broken ribs broken leg and arm and internal bleeding he was okay he stayed in the hospital for six months then he went home and learned never to do that again and he is still alive today

in-class we have been trying to achieve our goals in our writing i wanted to get better a punctuation

tarore embracing forgiveness

in-class we have been learning about not to judge and you will not be juged be forgevfull and you will be forgiven

finding a way out of the ngahere

 in-class we had to write a novel story where we get stuck in the bush and try to find a way out and learned how to do 2a 3bad- and boys

Lost in the ngahere 

 It was nine-thirty and I was with Kayden and Kash. We were out hunting and they had no luck. They were scaring the pigs.  they were way too loud. One hour passed and they were tired so they were heading out to find somewhere to sleep at nine o'clock at night. They headed north then they were lost in the ngahere. they couldn't see they lost their compass. Then a big, slimy, fat snake slithers up Kash's leg. We were “SCREAMING” in terror we didn't know what to do

It was Monday morning. We were tired and hungry. We were cold lying on the damp floor. We got up with aching pains running down my spine. I need to build our shelter. I went out to gather some sticks when in the corner of my eye was a big Oval-shaped lake.  I kept gathering sticks and I started heading back to the campsite. Kayden and Kash were still sleeping. I put up the structure and headed out again to gather some leaves for the roof . When I got back they were wide awake and hungry.

So I told them about the lake I saw and that it may have some fish in it but we had nothing to catch them.” Kash said what about a bow?'' So we planned how we would make it so we got a stick leftover from the shelter. We made and got a string of Kayden's bags and little sharpened sticks for the arrows. It was dark and we went to sleep. It was a rough cold night. The next day we were out testing our bow on a tree.

Three days had passed with no food and no water and we were starving!! So we went out to hunt the first ten tries and we were not in luck. Then we caught one. the beautiful, glamorous fish got eaten - by a big, ugly shark and came up and ate it. we were very sad and had a drink from the lake. We tried over and over and then we caught one. We headed back to camp and started a fire. We cooked the fish and then went to bed. we woke up and tried to find a way out of here then we went to go find the compass. They got the compass where the snake crawled up cashes leg then they tried to find their way out and they got lost again.